A violet burns inside my head
rhyme
full moon
the brain’s proud smoulder
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My revision process was this: I took out what felt like the poet speaking on the poem and the thought process, rearranged, and reduced it to the ember.
Different writers take a source text based on Heine and create their own versions. If you’re interested in participating, I’d be thrilled. (Details in the first blog post.)
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